10 Mart 2010 Çarşamba

TWO IMPORTANT CITIES IN MY LIFE (compare and contrast)

Coming from Mersin where is my hometown to Denizli was exciting and interesting for me.I like Mersin because of its vivid atmosphere.In addition,I like Denizli because of its silence and peaceful atmosphere.At first,I thought that these cities are completely different from each other but then I understood besides their differences,they have some things in common.
The first point,both of them have a big shopping center which are called Forum.They are so convenient for me in order to spend my free times.The second point,both of them are well-developed.Mersin is a developed city thanks to private companies and tourism income.Similarly,Denizli is a developed city thanks to its industry.The third point,both of them have places which relax me.In Mersin at the weekends,I went to sea side so its apperance and smell were a pozitive effect on me.In Denizli,I go to Incilipınar in order to walk around and escape from my distress.The last point,when you walk arond the streets of these cities in summer months,you can see so many tourists from other countries.
Despite their similarities,these cities are different from each other in some ways.Firstly,Mersin is much bigger and crowded than Denizli.In addition,Mersin is a vivid city and life is much faster.You can see people walking on the streets even late at night.On the other hand,this situation isn’t same in Denizli.The city sleeps approximately at ten o’clock.Another difference that Mersin is more modern because there are a lot of people who came from different places and customs.
As a result,it is interesting to notice how different cities can be similar and different at the same time.Mersin is more vivid and it gives me enerjy.In contrast,Denizli is slower and more peaceful so it gives me chance to relaxing.I love both of these cities due to their imporance in my life.

1 yorum:

  1. I liked your compare and contrast essay.Your topic sentences and supporting sentences are good.but I catch some mistakes like''Coming from Mersin where is my hometown to Denizli was exciting and interesting for me.''

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