12 Mart 2010 Cuma

REASONS OF DIVORCING (cause and effect)

All over the world especially in our country divorce rate is fairly high.It is a really big problem in our lives.He/she loves someone and marries but then something goes wrong unexpectedly so they divorce.It is a really tragic end ,isn’t it?Have you ever thought why they divorce in spite of their big love and perfect lives?In fact,there are a lot of important reasons which lead to divorce.
One of these reasons that before marring,couples think everything is perfect.They love and respect each other so much,problems aren’t important for them,they fly on the cloud etc…However,after marring,these emotions change swiftly.In spite of their love,they don’t respect each other because they don’t strrugle to get accustomed to marriage.In addition,even small problems can be brought up so couples start to get bored and then couples especially men deceive their partner unfortunately.Finally,they divorce.
Another reason leading to divorce that couples get marry without thinking carefully.Nowadays,so many young couples whose ages between 18 and 22 do that.In my opinion,their age aren’t enough to carry out and continue a marriage because they can’t carry responsibility of the marriage.As a result the same situation repeats.
In conclusion,marriage is not a simple desicion.On the other hand,it is turning-point in our lives.Therefore,before deciding,we should think carefully whether we are ready or not.

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  1. hi honey :) you have made your intoduction paragraph effective by adding questions.it is really good paragraph.then you have explained your thesis statement in your body paragraph in a good way,and in conclusion paragraph you have made advice so it is effective..I liked this essay honey :)

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