23 Ekim 2010 Cumartesi

NEVER GIVE UP (compare and contrast paragraph about 2 films)

All of us encounter with people who have different obstacles in our lives.There are so many people with obstacles so it is inevitable for us not to coming across with them.When we look at them at first,we are sorry for them and sometimes their situations give us pain.However,there are some people that change our perception of handicapped people like Hellen Keller and Frank McCourt.Angela’s Ashes is a movie that tells us Frank McCourt’s tormented life.The Miracle Worker is a movie that tells us Hellen Keller’s life.After I watched both of them,Angela’s Ashes affected me much more than The Miracle Worker.The reason of this,Frank McCourt’s life is full of different obstacles.He lives in a dilapidated house with his family.His parents especially his father can’t do anything for their children.As a result,some of their children die because of hunger and different kind of illnesses.I think these are the most powerful and impressive scenes.Also,besides his financial problems,he suffers from emotional problems.He suffers from hunger,shame and meager.However,he always yearns for a beter life.In order to achieve it,he works in different jobs.As a result,he finds some money and decides to go to America.According to my opinion,Liberity Monument is a symbol is his freedom.He succees in escaping from his obstacles.Although Frank McCourt and Hellen Keller have different types of obstacles,they are same in some ways.Firstly,both of them never give up.Also,in spite of their limitations,they can manage to push their limits.They are always hopefull.I think it must be lesson for us who don’t have handicap or obstacles.Besides their similarities,their obstacles are different.As I said,Frank McCourt suffers from poverty and emotional problems.However,Helen Keller suffers from physical and emotional problems.She is both blind and deaf.Because of her physical situation,she doesn’t aware of outside,sounds and words.With the help of her tutor,she becomes aware of the words.She relates the things with words.I must say that her tutor is a very patient person.The scenes that she tries to teach something in a big deal of patient are so impressive.Now,I ask to you.If we were in their shoes,what would we do?Would be hopefull like them in spite of these obstacles?Would we overcome?I think we should think about that.These films are guide for us.The world is not a easy place for everyone but in order to simplify it,we can do something,can’t we?

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  1. hi büşra:) I found some small mistakes= you used beter (better)and I am really affected your sentences, you used some idioms.I liked it:)

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  2. hi büşra:)))
    I like your paragraph so much.You use effective words.Your sentences are clear and effective.But I think, you should improve your comparison.thanks for writing:)))

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  3. hiii büşra...

    you are crazy :) how did you find those lots of sentences :)) however you had really good work. you have nice sentences. you have some mistakes but it doesn't matter so much... continue your works....

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